Tag: Writing

Metaphors and Similes

Task Description : for this week we only have a little bit of work because on Monday and Tuesday we had a Easter holiday so for today we only have two writing tasks to complete for this one I had to work at what was a simile and what was a metaphor I thought this was easy I used the hints to complete this task check it out .

Wonder writing – The robbery

One day Jake was going to school when school finished he did some homework then he ate dinner and went to bed but Jake needed water during the night . So he walked outside and grabbed a cup of water and drank it all up once it was finished . He dropped the glass cup onto the floor! he was frightened when he saw a robber so he quietly picked up the glass cups cracks and threw it in the bin.

 

He quietly went to hide in a safe place Jake hid in the bedroom Jake hid under the bed but then the robber opened the bedroom door Jake tired to stay as quiet as possible but then the robber saw Jake the robber pulled Jake out from under the bed . The robber took Jake outside to the living room the robber got out his robe and tied Jake in a chair then the robber pinched Jake. Then jake suddenly woke up he thought the robber was at his house but then he found out it was a dream. He woke up and got ready to go outside. Then he had a happy day .