Task description :today I did a task called picture prompt one I wrote 2-3 sentences.
Task description :Today I did a writing about Duffy show it was really fun .
Recount: Duffy Assembly
WALT: structure a recount using detailed and descriptive language.
When people read this recount they should feel interested and excited.
Plan of my paragraph topics: Use the right side to add in your planning
| 1. Introduction
3 sentences Orientates and hooks Makes the reader want to keep reading |
Who: Duffy, Team 4 and Team 5
What: Duffy Assembly Where: School hall When: Friday afternoon Why: To have fun and to learn about Duffy’s adventures. |
| 2. Body Paragraph 1
3-4 sentences What happened at the beginning of Duffy’s journey? |
Duffy was at home and Stuffy came to visit.
Duffy found stuffy a bit annoying and Stuffy couldn’t sleep |
| 3. Body Paragraph 2
3-4 sentences What happened to Duffy when he was in space? |
Duffy found a worm hole and went into space and got stuck there.
Duff-Zip and Stuff-Zip were there They had an adventure |
| 4. Body Paragraph 3
3-4 sentences How did the Duffy performance end? Did Duffy make it back? |
Duffy made it back to his room and his book was fixed. |
| 5. Conclusion
2-3 sentences Summarising the main points and sharing how you felt during the performance. |
I felt happy because the performance was really great. |
Start Writing here
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On a windy Friday afternoon at Pt England School… Pt England went to the hall for a Duffy show We first started singing the Duffy song after singing .The show started It was about Duffy going to space there was also aliens the aliens were like Duffy’s dad and cushion Duffy got to space by a black hole at space Duffy saw baby stars. When Duffy tried to get back to his room he went into random holes but the last black hole was the way for Duffy to get back to his room . Duffy really likes space and Duffy said his favourite food is colourful noodles. Duffy found his way at because when he first came to space he dropped all his books so he could get back home in the alien world and human world Stuffy cut out the space book in the alien world Stuffy glued it but when Duffy opened it when planet was not glued back on yet so Duffy gave it back to. The alien Stuffy Stuffy hugged the book and then gave it back to Duffy when Duffy opened the book and the book was fixed it was like magic and they finished. The actors asked if anyone had a question and a person said how did you fix the book back . Duffy showed how Stuffy fixed the book. Duffy opened the book, it was cut again back then Duffy opened the other side of the book and it was fixed. When we had to go back to class someone said thank you to the Duffy show people. It was really fun. I was happy because the show was amazing.