Tag: 2022 year 4 wirting

Immersion Recount Draft

 

Today on monday it was term 4 I was very excited we started the day with our maths book my book was level 4 just like term 4 the bell rang it was time to go to Assembly we lined up and we started to walk to Assembly  we sat down in the hall and then Mr Burt came he said good morning and we said good morning  back we started with the pray after the pray we sang a song about lean on me. Then it was time for the shows. It was team 1’s show. First  it was  about a superhero. It started when one of the teachers fell when she was going to the shops but a hero came. Was it a bee?   was it a plane, it was a hero  . There one was all about a hero . Now it was time for team 2 . They were going to act like puppets and we had to guess what they were acting like . My thoughts for the first one were sad or nervous, the second one was about fighting or anger. The next was happy. I think it was exciting. Now it was time for my team that is team 3 it was about a book talking about our feelings in our heart the feelings were happy calm sad excited angry and silly when it said sometime chocolate kiss’s can sometime help a teacher gave out kiss’s and when it was silly she was there again and popped a popper . Then it was team 4’s turn. They were  learning about their feelings. There were superheroes that would make people do the right thing. The superhero I liked in this one was the understanding one . Now it was the last show it was team 5 there one was about a boy named billy he was tall and the best person at basketball but sometimes people will tease him because he had hairy legs  but someone standed up for him and said stop it in her angry voice that’s not nice . My favourite one was team 3 not because I was in team 3 because they gave out

kiss’s and did the poppers and that they added more feelings to the story .We went back to class after the assembly ended. I felt   excited.

 

Will he save her

Start Writing Here: One nice sunny day there was a girl named Mia. She was bored so she said why not go for a walk. She went for a walk .She went to the park and she said it’s not too far  but when she was going to the park she saw  a portal she thought  she was dreaming but no she was not. She wanted to go in the portal so she did when she went in.

The portal. It was so long that it would not stop but then it was the end of that long ride . She saw a cave. It was beautiful  But then something grabbed her . She looked up and it was a girl with blood on her   she looked like a vampire . She wanted the girl to know her name so she said my name is Rap off girl.  Then something grabbed her. I was so happy that someone came to save me . When I looked up I saw it was spider man and he came to save me. I was even more happy that it was Spider man . Spider man took me home and said that 

I should rest so he went to the portal again . I had a little rest but then I woke up. It was just a dream. I was so happy  I thought it was not a dream  the end.