You are walking up the path into this Maori Village. Think about these questions as you write your description. Be sure to use lots of detail (adjectives) to SHOW your reader what you are seeing.
They are all cooking some food that looks like potatoes .And they are sitting on a log. There are four of them cooking. |
The boy is eating. He is chewing loudly. It looks like he likes it. And he is sitting on the log.