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Describing a Maori Village A

You are walking up the path into this Maori Village.  Think about these questions as you write your description.  Be sure to use lots of detail (adjectives) to SHOW your reader what you are seeing.

They are all cooking some food that looks like  potatoes .And they are sitting on a log. There are four of them cooking.

The boy is eating. He is chewing loudly. It looks like he likes it. And he is sitting on the log.

Choose It Narrative

where the map would take them when they were still walking. Jro  we are in the woods but they still did not give up so they made it . When they got the mud from the grass the box was mudding they went back home by climbing   on the rocks. When they got home koko  got keys that can open anything she gave Jro the keys  so he can open the box . When he opened it there were some ten rocks and one more key and one more map. Koko took the map and she said to Jro that the map says at night come to the woods. And I will see you there. Koko gave the map to Jro. He took it and said to her we are not going at all. He was the boss so she said ok to him when they took the ten rocks they put it in a cold door but then when the map flyed they were in a black hole but they could not get out.  It was like that because they did not go to the woods in the end. The end.